torstai 27. elokuuta 2015

Wrath

noun
1.
strong, stern, or fierce anger; deeply resentful indignation; ire.
2.
vengeance or punishment as the consequence of anger.
adjective
3.
Archaic. wroth.

There was a student. He had read to a test for a week. On the exam day he was late for 1 minute but the teacher didn’t let him in. He started raging and the teacher told him to calm down. He told her that he had read to the test for a week. The teacher was wondering whether to let him inside. She didn’t let him inside. The student was thinking what to do. He was chosen by Satan to break all the windows. The next day the principal told him that he’s expelled. He seems to be dead because he is believed to have committed a suicide.

Miiko, Egor, Santtu, 

2 kommenttia:

  1. Thanks Miiko, Egor and Santtu. That's one sad story, but very good language-wise! Here's a couple of corrections, though:

    The student was thinking what to do. -> The student was wondering what to do. *in this case, miettiä=wonder*
    The next day the principal told him that he's expelled. -> The next day the principal TOLD him that he WAS expelled. *present tense becomes past tense when the reporting verb is in past tense*
    He seems to be dead because he is believed to have committed a suicide. -> He seems to be dead because he is believed to have committed suicide. *no need for an article*

    Overall, good job!

    VastaaPoista
  2. Well that's pretty dark, and sad. :(

    VastaaPoista